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With reference to the ways that Sheriff presents Stanhope, show how far you agree that he is an admirable character.
You could make a variety of points if you were writing an essay in response to this question.
The following list is neither prescriptive nor exhaustive - you may not have time to mention all these points in an hour and there are many more points that you could make.
Just ensure you know the play well enough to come up with a selection of good points quickly, no matter what question you are asked.
- The audience first hear about Sherriff鈥檚 protagonistThe chief character in a novel, film or play. - Captain Dennis Stanhope - before Stanhope ever arrives on the stage. Osborne states, "Stanhope asked me to come and take over. He鈥檚 looking after the men coming in." Through the opinions of another character the audience immediately develops a positive view of this key character. The phrase "looking after" suggests that Stanhope cares for his men.
- Even though Stanhope has his flaws, in the same conversation as above Hardy asks if Stanhope is "Drinking like a fish, as usual?" Osborne counters Hardy鈥檚 negativity, "He鈥檚 a long way the best company commander we've got.鈥 Sheriff ensures through dramatic structure that our first impressions of Stanhope are positive, even though he foreshadows that the character has faults.
- The next scene in which Stanhope is important is when a young officer recruit - James Raleigh - arrives in the dugout. The audience still haven鈥檛 met Stanhope. Sherriff is deliberately delaying the appearance of the play's protagonist in order for the audience to develop certain expectations for when he finally arrives.
- Sherriff emphasises Stanhope鈥檚 youth in the stage directions by describing him as 鈥渘o more than a boy鈥. Seeing such a youthful character on stage would make his bravery and dedication to his duty all the more admirable.
- Raleigh鈥檚 鈥渉ero-worship鈥 of Stanhope convinces the audience that Stanhope is a special character - particularly as he is admired by such a young and enthusiastic officer.
- We find out that Stanhope has been awarded the Military Cross - an honour that suggests he is seen as courageous by his superiors - despite being only 21 years of age.
- Stanhope mentions he has been through 鈥渢hat awful affair on Vimy Ridge鈥, so the audience knows he has survived and continued on after a traumatic battle. We come to understand that this is why he drinks so much, and we admire his resilience while being more understanding of his addiction.
- Stanhope uses his skill as a leader to persuade Hibbert to stay when he is trying to leave the front line because of illness. Stanhope empatheticallyActing with awareness and understanding of another person's thoughts and feelings. says 鈥淚 know what you feel, Hibbert.鈥 He combines this with complimenting Hibbert, familiarly calling him 鈥渙ld chap鈥 and offering him a drink.
- Stanhope鈥檚 dedication and loyalty to his men are shown in his response to the Colonel after the raid that kills Osborne, 鈥淚 want to go and see those men.鈥 It is also shown in his sarcastic reply 鈥淪till it鈥檒l be awfully nice if the brigadier鈥檚 pleased鈥, when the Colonel insensitively seems triumphant about the raid.
- In Stanhope鈥檚 dialogue Sherriff shows that he is a human being as well as a hero to many. For example, when Stanhope reveals to Raleigh that he has not escaped the psychological horrors of war either, 鈥淵ou think there鈥檚 no limit to what a man can bear?鈥 Sheriff makes Stanhope more admirable to the audience by giving him the human qualities of fear and worry.
- Sherriff uses contrasts to make Stanhope an admirable character. For example, when the tall and slim Stanhope first appears on set he is with chubby red-faced Trotter. This emphasises the heroic physical attributes of Stanhope and helps us to understand the boyish love Raleigh has for him. Hibbert鈥檚 desire to leave and his pretence at illness to escape is contrasted with the character of Stanhope, who has 鈥渘ever had a rest鈥 according to Osborne. The contrast in Trotter鈥檚 addiction to food with Stanhope鈥檚 addiction to alcohol is used to show how everyone uses crutches to deal with the horrors of war. They may choose different things to help them cope, but in the end it is not just Stanhope who finds a way of 鈥渂reaking the strain鈥.
You should always try to provide a counterargument in any essay. This shows you know the play well enough to see other arguments and interpretations.
If you want to get high marks it is essential that you show understanding of different points of view.
Remember that characters and situations are rarely simple and that - like most real life people and events - there are often two sides to most opinions.
In this case, some points of counterargument could be:
- Stanhope - in his role as leader - is particularly harsh and intimidating when convincing Hibbert not to leave. While only doing his job, he still threatens Hibbert with execution for desertion and seems very unsympathetic, despite Hibbert鈥檚 obvious fear.
- Stanhope is also extremely harsh on Raleigh when he wants to read his letter home. While we know that Stanhope is worried about what the letter may contain, it could be argued that he is unnecessarily hard in the way he speaks to Raleigh who - we find out - only has words of admiration for his commanding officer. However, Stanhope does seem ashamed of his behaviour when he finds this out.