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How to structure a comparison response

Two women playing a skipping rope game with the ropes representing a comparison response when structuring an essay.
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Be sure to dicuss both texts through all of your answer.

A longer comparison response could follow this basic structure:

  • A very brief introduction linking the two texts (for example focusing on their or form).
  • Main points contrasting and/or comparing the two texts, supported by details. These could include points on: , language choices/literary devices, structure and reader鈥檚 response.
  • A very brief conclusion - this must use a key word from the question, and mention both texts.

When you compare texts, it鈥檚 important to talk about both texts all the way through. 顿辞苍鈥檛 write all about one text, then all about the other.

In each paragraph, make sure you mention both, even if a point is mostly about one of them.

Sentence starters

Some key phrases can help you to compare texts.

Similarities Differences
厂颈尘颈濒补谤濒测鈥In contrast鈥
贰辩耻补濒濒测鈥贬辞飞别惫别谤鈥
In the same wayOn the other hand鈥
Just as... so does....础濒迟别谤苍补迟颈惫别濒测鈥
Both... and...In a different way鈥
Similarities厂颈尘颈濒补谤濒测鈥
DifferencesIn contrast鈥
Similarities贰辩耻补濒濒测鈥
Differences贬辞飞别惫别谤鈥
SimilaritiesIn the same way
DifferencesOn the other hand鈥
SimilaritiesJust as... so does....
Differences础濒迟别谤苍补迟颈惫别濒测鈥
SimilaritiesBoth... and...
DifferencesIn a different way鈥

When comparing texts, you are making a point about two different texts, backing up ideas with evidence and explaining the idea. Then using a linking statement, you can connect the two ideas together.

Example

Take a look at the structure of the following example, where the writer compares how their mother and father react to poor behaviour:

Both my Mum and Dad lose their temper sometimes when we misbehave, but in completely different ways.

My Mum usually reacts to everything by losing her temper really quickly and screaming in response to make sure everyone knows just how furious she is. The thing that causes her to react strictly is usually leaving lights on. The quotation, 鈥業f I have to tell you again to turn those lights off, I will take the bulb out of your bedroom!鈥 This shows that sometimes she can exaggerate in her reactions.

On the other hand, Dad will hardly ever lose his temper, or raise his voice. Instead, he will just stare at you silently, so you know instantly that you are in trouble. The quotation, 鈥榃ell鈥 is the single word that he says once he has stared at you for a minute, and this shows that whilst he doesn鈥檛 scream and shout like Mum, he gives you a warning of the lecture that he is about to give you.

Analysis

Notice how the writer makes a point about how each parent loses their temper, backs it up with evidence and then explains their idea. The linking sentence starting with 鈥榦n the other hand鈥 shows how the two ideas are different.