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Analysing language in Critical ReadingSimiles and metaphors

In the first section of the National 5 Critical Reading assessment, you will be asked to comment on examples of language, such as word choice and imagery. Revise how to identify and analyse some of the key language techniques in this guide.

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Similes and metaphors

What is a simile?

A simile is a comparison where one thing is described as something else, using like or as.

What is a simile? How and why would you use one? Bitesize explains with examples from 鈥楪eorge Square鈥 by Jackie Kay.

Examples of similes

  • 'He looked as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a cake.' This really means he looked obvious and noticeable, he stood out, could not be missed.
  • 'She was like a snowflake.' This implies she was light, delicate, pure, insubstantial, fragile.
A tarantula on a cake

Question

Brian walked away from Sheila. He was as cold as ice.

How does this simile reveal Brian鈥檚 attitude towards Sheila?

What is a metaphor?

A metaphor is a way of describing something by saying it is something else.

While a simile compares things using like or as, a metaphor creates a direct comparison by saying something is something else. It's not actually true but it gives the reader a clearer idea of what it is like.

What is a metaphor? How and why would you use it? Bitesize explains with examples from 鈥榁alentine鈥 by Carol Ann Duffy.

Examples of metaphor

  • His house was now his prison. The idea here is someone feels their house is a place where they feel trapped, imprisoned or locked in; a place where they lack freedom.
  • James was a missile, launching himself at his opponent. This makes James sound like a weapon, moving quickly and powerfully and ready to cause damage.

Question

鈥楳ike was a night owl.鈥

What does the above metaphor tell us about Mike鈥檚 sleep pattern?

What is the difference between a simile and a metaphor?

A simile makes an indirect comparison using the words 'like' or 'as.'

A metaphor makes the comparison directly, substituting one thing for another.

For example:

  • My sister roared like a lion. This is a simile as the speaker uses 'like' to indirectly compare their sister to a lion. It suggests that the way their sister shouted was as loud and aggressive as a lion's roar.
  • My sister is a wild lion. This is a metaphor as the speaker is making a direct comparison. They are suggesting that their sister is a lion, rather than like one. It suggests how wild and uncontrollable her behaviour is.

Question

Think about the following two sentences. Which of these is a simile and which is a metaphor? Are they making a direct or indirect comparison?

  1. The snow is like a white blanket.
  2. The snow is a white blanket.