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Describing facial expressionsWhat to write about

Facial expressions can tell us a lot about characters, situations and subtext. It's important that you learn what they reveal about emotions and moods, and how to create and describe them.

Part of DramaWriting about drama and theatre

What to write about

You won鈥檛 be able to comment on every facial expression in a performance. But you can select the key points of a piece of work to talk about so you have a clear commentary that highlights the most important elements.

When writing about facial expressions, every comment needs two elements:

  • the details of the facial expression
  • what that expression conveyed or what it intended to convey

These key points will only be expressed effectively if each and every one of them is explicitly described and linked to the effect or impact they were designed to have. This is still true even if you are being negative:

She tried to express shock with a wide-eyed expression, but ended up looking slightly startled as she never lost the slight smile on her face.

In this example, both the intended expression and effect and the actual ones are expressed with . Precision is the key word when describing facial expressions.

Interpreting a script

Take a scenario and a line from a play of your choice, eg:

All over the world, people will be dying, conceiving children, growing vegetables鈥
Eric in John Godber's Bouncers

Work with a partner. One of you should write precise instructions for the facial expression needed to portray this line effectively. The other has to play the line according to these instructions. If they weren鈥檛 precise enough, write them again together to create a detailed description that enable the reader to 鈥榮ee鈥 it as they read it.

Note that this line begins in a philosophical way and Eric could convey this with a thoughtful and 鈥榙eep鈥 look on his face. His eyes should look to the distance as if he鈥檚 seeing the people as he speaks. When he reaches the punchline, growing vegetables which is a mundane pastime compared to the epic themes of 鈥榙eath鈥 and 鈥榣ife鈥 that precede it, his facial expression should change. He should raise a quizzical eyebrow, but keep a deadpan expression on his face so as not to signpost the joke excessively.