Choosing quotations
When you first read a poem, some words or phrases will stand out. Highlight these key words in the text so they are easy to find. Ask yourself:
- what does this quotation show about the poet鈥檚 choice of words?
- why did these words attract my attention?
Example
the waterlogged earth
gulping for breath at our feet
Question
Discuss the poet鈥檚 choice of words in this quotation.
Sheers has chosen words to suggest the sounds the walkers will hear, capturing the glugging sound made when you walk over wet mud. The 鈥榞鈥 sound in 鈥榳aterlogged鈥 is echoed in 鈥榞ulping鈥, which itself is an example of an The sounds of words to express or underline their meaning, eg 'crunch', 'pop'.. The wet earth struggling for breath is an example of A type of imagery in which non-human objects, animals or ideas are given human characteristics.. Sheers is bringing the landscape to life in his poem.
Question
Why do these words grab the reader鈥檚 attention?
The image of people walking over a 鈥榞ulping鈥 creature is disturbing and vivid. It is as if they are crushing the life out of it, almost without noticing.
Forming a view
Use this process with each of the quotations you highlight in a poem. Put them all together and your answers will help you to form a view about the poem as a whole.
When writing about the poem, use your quotations as evidence to support your views. You should try to say something about the poet鈥檚 intention in their choice of words, the effect the words have on the reader and why they attracted your attention.