How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to The Picture of Dorian Gray? (10 marks)
The character’s title of ‘Lord’ suggests high status and the descriptions of the character’s setting reinforce the feel of decadence and wealth. Wilde uses the senses to create interest for the reader, for example “rich odour” and “heavy scent”. The choice of the adjectives “rich” and “heavy” might suggest that the smell of the flowers is over-powering. This is then contrasted with the word “delicate”. The descriptions create an overall impression of luxury and wealth. The references to “Persian...Toyko…Japanese…” give the opening an exotic feel, which intrigues the reader.
The simile choice of the ‘beauty so flamelike’ also leaves the reader with an impression of something fleeting. The very long sentence is the second paragraph also links to the feeling of being over powered with luxury and has the effect of layering lots of rich images. The description of the setting seems to imply the character is bored, which could interest the reader further. For example, the references to ‘bear the burden’ and ‘stillness more oppressive’.
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Using the name of the author shows an awareness of the fact there is a writer behind the text.
The points are supported with short quotations which are embedded into the sentences.
The point about the senses is developed, with details about the choice of adjectiveA describing word. and their effect.
The answer then goes on to further explain the effects of other language choices (like the simileA comparison using 'like' or 'as' to create a vivid image, eg as big as a whale; float like a butterfly, sting like a bee.) and links them to explain the effect on the reader.