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Title: Into the water

by Amelia from Surrey | in writing, poetry

Hands clench tight, flailing madly
Silver eyes, unblinking, watching sadly
Nothing to push, nothing to hit
Pulling you down into great black pit
Lungs tight, constricting and maddening
Everything wasted. Can't believe what is happening.
Eyes gently close, thrashing slowly stops
Fingers uncurl, head gently bobs.

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