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Title: Torn Apart

by Rosie | in writing, fiction

Torn Apart

'Keisha!! Stop Flirting With Ollie!' Alice Giggled
'Whaaat!! He is Bloody Marvellous, Darling Ali!' Said Keisha in a mock posh voice.
Keisha and Alice Barton were completely inseperable, twins in every way.
On Saturdays Ali and Kee both loved to go shopping in Kingley Park Outlet with their best friends Katy and Sarah.
One Saturday afternoon Katy suggested going to the Kingley and then going to a hot new club called Fusion in town.
'Come on guys, we do the same boring things EVERY Saturday night, Pleeeasee,'She Begged,
'Oh all right then!'They all agreed.

So they went round Kingley as normal and bought some gorge outfits for that night.
When they were all getting ready to go out Sarah suddenly said:
'Oh god guys what about the 'rents??'She sighed heavily.
'Covered. I told EVERYBODIES parents we were going to a little house party and would not be back till late.' Alice said expertly.
When they arrived at Fusion the atmosphere was buzzing.
Just as the girls were leaving Keisha said she needed the bathroom and would meet them at the station.
The girls waited 45 minutes for Keisha, they were pretty worried.
'She must have caught the early bus and beaten us there,' Sarah reassured them.
But the next morning Keisha was nowhere to be seen, she never came home.
Alice flicked on the telly and it happened to be on the news channel so she listened absent minded to the serious looking reporter.
'I am here at Fusion Club where last night 3 people were shot dead in the ladies restrooms at about 2:45 am.
The girls have been identified as,
Rhiannon Winters, 17
Alexa Saverendi, 16
Keisha Barton, 17.
The girls were held at gunpoint and each shot 17 times to the head, chest and abdomen.
This is Lauren Marc at Fusion Nightclub,
Good day.'
Alice gasped in shock and poured the whole story to her mum.
That night she could not sleep so she opened her window to let in some air.
The atmosphere was dead, as Alice glided through the sky onto the cold, concrete below...

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I have heard about how suicidal deaths are one of the biggest death causes now so I wanted to put myself in the mind of one of those poor people I wrote this 3 years ago at the age of ten.

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