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by jade from Essex | in writing, fiction
(Jade on the phone to Kelly)
Jade- hey babe
Kelly- heyy
Jade ' are you coming out tonight Richards going to take us for a drive Dan can come??
Kelly- ye sure ill be over in ten minutes ill get my brother to get us alcohol.
Jade- phat I will see ya soon
(Kelly gets to jades with a bottle of vodka)
Kelly- hey
Jade come in they will be here in ten min's
Kelly wicked we can all get well drunk then stay at Dan's!
Jade ye sounds fun
(the boys get there the girls leave gigerling they get in the car and drive to town they park up near a park and walk over to the park)
Jade hey baby
Richard you okay babes got some booze I hear
Jade yeh Kelly and me have a litter
Richard cool
Dan this is going to be phat rich you driving us back to mine later ye?
Richard- yes
(they all get really drunk other than Jade there in Richards car just about to crash it all freezes Jade speaks to the audience)
Jade- why did I get in the car I new he was drunk what about the other people in that car I cant believe I have done this I just hope it will all be okay.
Every one in Richards cars survives other than jade the only one who was not in the wrong and a baby dies who was in the other car Kelly Richard and dan change and show everyone that drink driving is so wrong
drink driving i think it is so rong i know some one whol crashed while drink driving lukylie everything was okay but i just feel sorry for the other people on the road i also think its a big issue in young people nowdays i think somthing like this should be showan in shcools
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