Title: My Version Of Private Peaceful
by Precious from London | in writing, fiction
Tommy is playing in the forest when suddenly, he hears a noise.As he looks up he sees a large tree, swinging slightly.He knows what's going to happen, he's going to get squashed, crushed , killed. He hears his father shouting "RUN TOMMO,RUN ". But he can't move, his legs are frozen, so he waits upon his death. Instaed he gets pushed aside, he is still for a minute as he hears a loud thud. Slowly he gets up and goes to the tree, he can bearly make out his father under it, blood paoring out every way it can.
Tommy knows that under that tree should be him not his dad. He knows what he has done , and the guilt will be with him until he dies, Tommy had killed his father.
I was reading private peaceful by Michael Morpurgo and loved the technique he used when writing , so I gave it a go.
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