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Title: Redemption

by raxstylz | in writing, fiction, characters

This is a story about a lonely man who lived in the outskirts of Norwich. He lived in a small cottage with a hay roof and rotting wood which made a very distinct creak when the wind blew at night. He never went out of his small cottage because he never needed to. He grew his crops on his land and farmed cows and sheep. He had no friends and had lost his family long ago when he was happy and lived a good life in the city where he grew up.
This story begins in the cold night of the 25th of December 1854 where Jeremiah our lonely man of 32 was sitting close to the fireplace drowsy from the scotch he was drinking. His eyes slowly closed as his heart which was filled with pain slowly stopped beating but only seconds later his eyes opened and he was standing in the middle of a road and everything was a shade of gray and the only thing that had color was him, a dead tree and a small black figure which kept getting bigger. His heart racing he climbed the tree and as he trod softly on the branch, he looked around it was definitely coming towards him. His heart now beating like a race horse the black figure now right under him was actually two beings under black cloaks and as they removed their hood it turned out to be St. Gabriel and St. Michael also known as the angels of death. Gabriel was a beautiful being with a halo around his head and was glowing a bright gold which gave him a warm feeling but St. Michael was made of millions of eyes and tongues of all the souls he had taken to hell and it seemed that he was taking the golden glow away from Gabriel.
The angles stared at his him and he responded by staring back and there was no communication between them until Gabriel said 芒聙聹Jeremiah you have lived a sad life after your family died and it has hurt them deeply and now you have killed yourself by drinking, you have two options Jeremiah, you can go with Michael or we can give you another chance at life to redeem yourself for the pain you caused your family after death and if you do you can embrace your final breath knowing that you will see your family but if you don芒聙聶t you will burn in satins lair for all eternity.......it is up to you芒聙聺. Jeremiah speech less stared into the angles eyes and he said with a blank face 芒聙聹I want a second chance, I want to make my family happy and I want to see them again please St. Gabriel give me a second chance芒聙聺 and with a flash of bright light he awoke in his small shack the fire burnt out and his field covered in snow and he wondered if it was all a dream or if it was real but he didn芒聙聶t care, after that day he lived his life to the fullest and at his death bed as he was taking his last breaths and his close friends sat next to him he smiled.

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