O. Hopkins, Divet Productions
Hi
I watched the film a
few times over, and I've
thought of a few
pointers. The acting
skills are not bad,
although important
speech must be
emphasised and made
clear. Most of the
faults are technical.
The entire first scene is
unpercievable, and the
2nd barely makes
sense. The editor has
cut off the clip during
speech, a bad idea.
Other than those, by
standards, it is ok.
Nick
A big improvement
would have been to
use close-up mics
- the speech is
inaudible a lot of
the time because
of wind noise.
