O. Hopkins, Divet Productions
Hi.
Not a bad piece for a
year 9 class,
considering how little
time and experienced
intervention there was.
If they wanted to
improve, a good way to
start would be to have
only one person doing
the voice over at any
one time. With multiple
voices they do get
tangled and out of
sync with each other. It
does get across the
majority of the play,
and its
understandable, so I
like it.
Tom 56.56
Brilliant piece
of work most
deffinetley the
best here
Adam Carpenter
Fantastic play
Amazing fighting
Brilliant words
U have tried hard
Little flaws
Oo, something fab
Speical. Very.
Read it
downwards!
callum abbott
original, i like
it
owen again
i completely
agree with
saskia. the
matrix doesnt
even have swords!
owen
this one was
funny and i
liked the fight
scene a lot.
bob
this is one of
the best (mini)
flims out!!!!!
10/10???
Dom
It lasted more
than 60 seconds.
Anna
I couldn't
understand half
the words but I
liked the sword
fighting!
Saskia
Cool but what
had it to do
with the Matrix,
someone kindly
explain? :-)
Tinkerbell
I liked it, it
was quite good.
Caitlin in NZ
It gets a high
mark for
creativity, but
the coordination
was awful. You
can barely hear
the story
because of the
jumble of
voices. I think
a small intense
part of the play
would have been
more effective.
Jessica
I really got what
Macbeth was about.
It really
explained it
well. Good job.
Al
Easily the best
I've seen. Gets
more of the
story covered.
Snow White
I thought this
piece was
brilliantly
choreographed
but would be
better if they
wore costumes.
Simon Dingwall
I am harsh when
reviewing these,
but that was
fantastic! It
has anything you
could want,
fantastic
creativity,
great humour,
and brilliant
acting. Very
informative and
great
entertainment
value. Not the
best set or
costume, but the
rest more than
makes up for
this. 9.5/10.
haylz
I thought this
was a great
attempt to do
all of the play
in 60 seconds. I
thought the bit
when MacDuff was
waving at them
lol!
Jack Maller
This is good
it gets the
whole story
across, and it is
also action
packed and I
enjoyed it.
Kathryn Harrop
That was a very
good performance
with very good
atmosphere. The
rap rhymed and
told the whole
story in just a
minute-an
impressive thing
to do! Good
acting!
Steffi Mustard
I like this one,
because it is
clear to hear
and very
funny!!!!!!
(especially the
part with the
wood)
~SaRaH~
Very good
story, and in
60 seconds too!
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The best one so
far! Clever
lyrics and
wonderful sword
fighting! pure
class!
Thomas
A good way of
getting the
whole story of
macbeth across &
good rhymes in
the rap itself
