Paul Farley:
Soldiers turned to poetry because they wanted to share their experiences or to give a shape to their emotion, because remember there was nothing like counselling like we have now, there was not much for them when they came back home.
Lucy:
And do you think that was the case for our next poet?
Paul Farley:
Wilfred Owen. Yes it was really. I mean he became an officer in 1915, he didn't fight on the Somme itself, but he saw action in that Sector early in 1917 where he led a platoon of soldiers and saw absolutely horrible things. He wrote a letter home to his mum saying "I haven't been the Front, I've been in front of the Front", so right in the thick of it. And this poem we're gonna hear in the moment, 'Dulce et Decorum Est', it sort of captures this new mood that's abroad in the country, a new attitude that comes in after the Somme.
Ben:
Okay, lots to listen out to there. So here's Lee Armstrong: again with Dulce et Decorum Est.
Lee Armstrong:
Bent double like old beggars sacks,Knock-kneed coughing like hags we cursed through sludge,Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs and towards our distant rest began to trudge.Men marched asleep.Many lost their boots, but limped on blood-shod.All lame. All blind. Drunk with fatigue.Deaf even to the hoots of tired out stripped five-nines that fell behind.Gas. Gas, quick boys.An ecstasy of fumbling at fitting the clumsy helmets just in time.But someone still was yelling out and stumbling and floundering like a man in fire or lime.Dim through the misty panes and thick green light as under a green sea, I saw him drowning.In all my dreams before my helpless sight he plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.If in some smothering dreams you too could pace behind the wagon that we flung him in, and watch the white eyes writhing in his face.His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin.If you could hear at every jolt the blood come gargling from his froth corrupted lungs, obscene as cancer, bitter of the cud.Of vile incurable sores on innocent tongues.My friend, you would not tell with such high zest to children ardent for some desperate glory the old lie.Dulce et decorum est.Pro patria mori.
Ben:
Thanks again Lee, that was amazing. And Paul this poem it's very different to the first one we heard isn't it? It's so much more tangible.
Paul Farley:
Incredibly different, things really changed since we listened to the Rupert Brooke poem. I always get the sense you're listening to a poet bearing witness, who knows what he's talking about and is telling it like it is, he's bringing us the news and it still sounds like news a 100 years later. You think back to the Rupert Brooke poem, all that rich earth he talked about, and now its turned to sludge. English heaven has turned into a kind of hell.
Ben:
Absolutely, very vivid imagery. And what's the significance of the way that Wilfred Owen paints the characteristics of the soldiers?
Paul Farley:
You get all of these solid details and the soldiers are described, there's all of these horrible descriptions. He doesn't pull his punches at all with this poem and he's telling us what war, what modern industrial warfare does to this, does to the human body, and he's not afraid to be graphically detailed actually.
Ben:
Sure, and he doesn't just use English to convey this, he's also employing Latin as well. Why's he doing that?
Paul Farley:
Yeah, if you think about the way we use words in a poem as special effects, then this poem's got a big trick up its sleeve, it uses language on different levels if you like. So the title in the last line, 'Dulce et Decorum Est. Pro patria mori', it means something like it is sweet and proper to die for you country, but Owen mixes that up with the language of men who are in blind panic because they're being gassed. He put it right next to Latin so he kinds of sets language against itself in a funny kind of way.
Ben:
And language is interesting as well because in poetry we can use language not just the sort of elaborate language, you can use sort of informality and things like that to convey a message as well.
Paul Farley:
Yeah, I mean people think that a poem has got to be poetic or beautiful and its got to use this kind of lofty elevated language, it doesn't have to, you can mix different levels of language up. It's like you don't go around dressed in your best bib and tucker and nice clothes all of the time, sometimes you're in smart casual, just casuals, and language is the same and it's fun to mix it up.
Ben:
Absolutely. Well that leads us on very nicely to our next task because we want you and everyone watching to think about the way we use language in different scenarios. I mean sometimes we're very formal like when you speak to your headteacher or perhaps an older relative who's telling you off, and sometimes our language is very informal and very chatty. Isn't it mate? Like the words that you use may if you were texting a friend. So we're gonna show you three of the War propaganda posters, all you need to do is pick one and write your response in the kind of slang you'd use if you were texting your friend. So think hashtags and text speak, and phrases that are local to your area, jot them down on worksheet two and that includes everyone watching from your classrooms. We need loads of ideas so keep them coming in please. I'm just going to do a quick example with Paul now, so Paul if you give me the phrases and I'll give you my normal text speak response which is obviously part of my everyday vocab.
Paul Farley:
Are you ready for this, Ben?
Ben:
I am.
Paul Farley:
Okay, statement number one. "Answer now in your country's hour of need".
Ben:
Tuts boy I'm on dat ting.
Paul Farley:
Thank you. I've no idea what that means, but it sounded good. The second one. "England expects every man to do his duty".
Ben:
OMG I'm so like busy innit.
Paul Farley:
Okay, I get the idea. The third one is, "Your country needs you".
Ben:
YOLO #swag goals C U there. Thank you, I'm sure you can agree that was a masterclass [LAUGHS]. Right Paul?
Paul Farley:
Absolutely.
Ben:
Thank you, and thanks for helping me through that. Guys, I know they were pretty good, but please no copying yeah. Here's another 30 seconds on the clock so get writing now.
Schoolchild:
I put for the first one. Ah nice #totals down for it.
Lucy:
Love it, love it. Have you got anything?
SchoolchildYeah, I'm not goin #can't be bothered.
Lucy:
Good, brilliant. Okay what have you got down there, Ben?
Ben:
Yeah we got some social media comments Lucy: . So from Megan Mould at Red House Academy say, ~Nah! I don't wanna fight so you've got nee chance! [LAUGHS] A good one Megan. And Neve Garrett at Red House Academy says, "I'm sorry, I'll pass cos I don't wanna fight. Soz". Maybe a pacifist there. Paul, what do make to all these ideas?
Paul Farley:
I'm getting some good feedback and I will definitely be able to use some of these in the finished poem. Yeah, they sound really good.