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Use precise verbs

A way to liven up a piece of writing is to choose action words - verbs - with great care. Use words to show the reader the actions or behaviour of a character. For example:

He walked into the room and said, 鈥淭his is what I was waiting for.鈥

By choosing more precise verbs, you can give 鈥榙epth鈥 to your writing. This gives the reader a more vivid impression of your scene and characters.

Notice how each of the following sentences changes your perception of the character:

He strolled into the room and muttered, 鈥淭his is what I was waiting for.鈥

He marched into the room and barked, 鈥淭his is what I was waiting for.鈥

He shuffled into the room and sobbed, 鈥淭his is what I was waiting for.鈥

Think about the impression and the atmosphere you鈥檙e aiming to create as you make your vocabulary choices.