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William Crawley | 10:45 UK time, Thursday, 8 October 2009

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by Michael Longley

Put in mind of his own father and moved to tears
Achilles took him by the hand and pushed the old king
Gently away, but Priam curled up at his feet and
Wept with him until their sadness filled the building.

Taking Hector's corpse into his own hands Achilles
Made sure it was washed and, for the old king's sake,
Laid out in uniform, ready for Priam to carry
Wrapped like a present home to Troy at daybreak.

When they had eaten together, it pleased them both
To stare at each other's beauty as lovers might,
Achilles built like a god, Priam good-looking still
And full of conversation, who earlier had sighed:

'I get down on my knees and do what must be done
And kiss Achilles' hand, the killer of my son.'

Longley's poem is for . (Read more about Longley's poem .) It's a wonderful poem which matures with every new reading. Patrick, the Northern Ireland director of Amnesty International, chose the poem because it calls attention to the importance of human rights (and much more too).

I am now receiving your suggestions for a poem exploring religion: it could be devotional, or sceptical, celebratory or philosophical. You could even write an original poem. I'll post my own choice by the end of the day.

Comments

  • Comment number 1.


    I've been reading Larkin lately and High Windows immediately springs to mind - a wonderful poem whose associations brought to mind another favourite, very different, Herbert's Teach me, my God and King.

    The major problem with organised religion is that it provides so much glass.

  • Comment number 2.

    This comment was removed because the moderators found it broke the house rules. Explain.

  • Comment number 3.

    Someone ought to have re-penned this for the Garvaghy Road...

    Antichrist, Or The Reunion Of Christendom: An Ode
    G. K. Chesterton

    ‘A Bill which has shocked the conscience of every Christian
    community in Europe.’ —Mr. F.E. Smith, on the Welsh
    Disestablishment Bill.

    ARE they clinging to their crosses,
    F.E. Smith,
    Where the Breton boat-fleet tosses,
    Are they, Smith?
    Do they, fasting, trembling, bleeding,
    Wait the news from this our city?
    Groaning ‘That’s the Second Reading!’
    Hissing ‘There is still Committee!’
    If the voice of Cecil falters,
    If McKenna’s point has pith,
    Do they tremble for their altars?
    Do they, Smith?

    Russian peasants round their pope
    Huddled, Smith,
    Hear about it all, I hope,
    Don’t they, Smith?
    In the mountain hamlets clothing
    Peaks beyond Caucasian pales,
    Where Establishment means nothing
    And they never heard of Wales,
    Do they read it all in Hansard
    With a crib to read it with —
    ‘Welsh Tithes: Dr Clifford Answered.’
    Really, Smith?

    In the lands where Christians were,
    F.E. Smith,
    In the little lands laid bare,
    Smith, O Smith!
    Where the Turkish bands are busy
    And the Tory name is blessed
    Since they hailed the Cross of Dizzy
    On the banners from the West!
    Men don’t think it half so hard if
    Islam burns their kin and kith,
    Since a curate lives in Cardiff
    Saved by Smith.

    It would greatly, I must own,
    Soothe me, Smith!
    If you left this theme alone,
    Holy Smith!
    For your legal cause or civil
    You fight well and get your fee;
    For your God or dream or devil
    You will answer, not to me.
    Talk about the pews and steeples
    And the Cash that goes therewith!
    But the souls of Christian peoples . . .
    Chuck it, Smith!

  • Comment number 4.

    "The Song of the Strange Ascetic" by Chesterton would be fun to hear aloud. "Green Categories" by RS Thomas is deeper, more interesting, but less fun. It isn't available on-line.

  • Comment number 5.

    If I had been a Heathen,
    I'd have crowned Neaera's curls,
    And filled my life with love affairs,
    My house with dancing girls;
    But Higgins is a Heathen,
    And to lecture rooms is forced,
    Where his aunts, who are not married,
    Demand to be divorced.

    Now who that runs can read it,
    The riddle that I write,
    Of why this poor old sinner,
    Should sin without delight-
    But I, I cannot read it
    (Although I run and run),
    Of them that do not have the faith,
    And will not have the fun.

  • Comment number 6.

    The Hound of Heaven by Francis Thompson

  • Comment number 7.


    Michael Symmons Roberts is a poet I've quoted before, I had to force myself to choose just one.


    On Dyeing

    Once we knew it took a boatful
    of crushed shellfish - murex and purpura -
    to turn one sleeve imperial purple.
    It took millions of beetles to die cochineal,
    pulverised madder roots for scarlet,
    indigo that went blue when it met the air.
    Without mordants to fix them,
    all these colours fell to pastel, then to cream.
    A dress could drain of lilac in an evening.
    No beauty lasted without ox-blood, oil,
    oak-galls, urine, alum, salt, sh*t.
    Once we knew the cost of dyeing.


    I didn't know what to do about the 's' word, I hope it's OK.

  • Comment number 8.


    And something old too!

    How could I leave out William Cowper?


    The Contrite Heart.

    The Lord will happiness divine
    On contrite hearts bestow;
    Then tell me, gracious God, is mine
    A contrite heart or no?

    I hear, but seem to hear in vain,
    Insensible as steel;
    If aught is felt, 'tis only pain,
    To find I cannot feel.

    I sometimes think myself inclined
    To love Thee if I could;
    But often feel another mind,
    Averse to all that's good.

    My best desires are faint and few,
    I fain would strive for more;
    But when I cry, "My strength renew!"
    Seem weaker than before.

    Thy saints are comforted, I know,
    And love Thy house of prayer;
    I therefore go where others go,
    But find no comfort there.

    Oh make this heart rejoice or ache;
    Decide this doubt for me;
    And if it be not broken, break --
    And heal it, if it be.

  • Comment number 9.

    The world is charged with the grandeur of God.
    It will flame out, like shining from shook foil;
    It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil
    Crushed. Why do men then now not reck his rod?
    Generations have trod, have trod, have trod;
    And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;
    And wears man's smudge and shares man's smell: the soil
    Is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.

    And for all this, nature is never spent;
    There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
    And though the last lights off the black West went
    Oh, morning, at the brown brink eastward, springs -
    Because the Holy Ghost over the bent
    World broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings.

    Gerard Manley Hopkins

  • Comment number 10.

    Following my last suggestion, here's another one by Gerard Manley Hopkins, which is a sublime description of depression and grief:


    No worst, there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief,
    More pangs will, schooled at forepangs, wilder wring.
    Comforter, where, where is your comforting?
    Mary, mother of us, where is your relief?
    My cries heave, herds-long; huddle in a main, a chief
    Woe, world-sorrow; on an age-old anvil wince and sing -
    Then lull, then leave off. Fury had shrieked 'No ling-
    ering! Let me be fell: force I must be brief'.

    O the mind, mind has mountains; cliffs of fall
    Frightful, sheer, no-man-fathomed. Hold them cheap
    May who ne'er hung there. Nor does long our small
    Durance deal with that steep or deep. Here! creep,
    Wretch, under a comfort serves in a whirlwind: all
    Life death does end and each day dies with sleep.


    Comment: this is one of a series of Hopkins' "Sonnets of Desolation" written during his time in Dublin, which, for various reasons, was especially lonely and difficult. It could be called his "dark night of the soul". These are not sonnets of doubt in God, but, as I see it, fellowship with God in suffering.

  • Comment number 11.


    An open question relating to the moderating policy of the ´óÏó´«Ã½.

    The poem I posted was by Michael Symmons Roberts, entitled 'On Dyeing'.

    I was uncertain about posting it as it contained a 4 letter word, one beginning with the letter 's'.

    In posting it I used a '*' instead of one of the letters and then added at the end of my post that I hoped it would be OK as I didn't know what to do.

    I was quoting a poem. William asked us to post poems exploring religion. It was a religious type of poem, or at least could have been understood that way. I thought carefully about posting it.

    Now here's the thing, John Wright posted the same word, on the God Question thread, with the word bull in front of it and the letters 'ter' at the end of it. John even used this word in reference to a person. That word was allowed. Later Graham Veale referred to John's use of the word using the numbers 88 in the middle instead of all the letters.

    Question: What exactly is the policy in relation to questionable words?

    My use of it had context and was not directed at any individual. What's going on guys?

  • Comment number 12.


    On second thoughts... let's not get side tracked... let's just move on.

    This has the potential to be a very readable thread, deleted post or not.

  • Comment number 13.

    There once was a pixie called God
    Who cared about Fenian and Prod,
    Or so people claimed,
    So they killed and they maimed
    In the name of this terrible fraud.

  • Comment number 14.

    Everyday is the same
    No fun, friend or games
    Walking across the playground
    People laughing with their friends.

    Someone is waving!
    At me?
    No the girl behind
    I should know better.

    Everyday is the same
    No one to sit beside me at lunch
    No one to hang out with at break
    No one’s shoulder to cry on.

    Teachers pick on me
    Because I am the odd one out
    No one sitting beside me
    Though even if there was
    They wouldn’t talk to me.

    This day isn’t the same
    There is a girl. A refugee
    Come from Africa
    She is talking to me!

    Me and her
    She and I
    Us
    We are friends.

    My fun is over
    It’s not fair
    She got sent back
    I am alone
    AGAIN!

    C.L.Corr

  • Comment number 15.


    Twinkle twinkle little god
    Are you a Fenian or a Prod
    Neither, said the God on high,
    And promptly fell to earth to die.

  • Comment number 16.

    Peter

    Maybe the post was referred as ther was an issue re. copyrighting?
    I was unaware that the 'Song of the Strange Ascetic' can't be copied - most of Chesterton's poems and books can.

    Can Will or anyone help re. copyrights and poems? Legally, how much of a copyrighted poem can we quote? Is there any way of discovering if a poem is under a copy right.

    I was going to suggest WH Auden's 'Song of the Devil '

    But his preferred version has a four letter word that takes us well beyond 88s.

    GV

  • Comment number 17.

    A badger, a frog and a pigeon
    Fell out on a point of religion -
    The source of the bitchin':
    Which part of the kitchen
    Is where the Lord might put his fridge in?

  • Comment number 18.


    I tried to write a reply
    But I really can't figure out why
    Cos your rhymin' was great,
    It's clear that I'm beat (bate)
    And yive give me a poke in the eye.

  • Comment number 19.

    Here are two from a poet called Gerard Kelly:

    The Games People Pray

    Some pray like a BMW:
    Seven coats
    Of shine and shimmer
    Masking the hardness of steel,
    With an Anti-Emotion Warranty
    To guard against
    The least sign of trust.

    Some pray like a Porsche:
    Nought to victory
    In 6.7 seconds,
    Banking on the promises
    Of Pray-As-You-Earn prosperity.

    Jesus recommended
    Praying in the garage
    With the door shut,
    Engine and radio off,
    Praying when no one is looking,
    Forgetting
    The traffic of the day.
    Meeting God
    In the quiet lay-by,
    Far from
    The Pray and Display.



    Island Life

    Sentenced,
    In a crowded room,
    To solitary confinement
    We cling to our smiles
    Like lifebelts
    And pray
    They will keep us afloat.
    Like the child who drowned
    In a busy swimming pool,
    It isn't that no one cares
    Just that no one sees
    We're there.

    No man is an island,
    But when it comes
    To making causeways
    Most of us
    Are all at sea.

  • Comment number 20.


    Have to say LSV, I like those!

  • Comment number 21.

    NI.

    There are tears, Lord.
    Some people say that we shouldnt shed them.

    Tears, they say,
    Are only embarrassing, and upsetting for other people.

    But you have given us tears, Lord,
    A Sacrament of our bodies.

    An outward expression of an inner reality.

    A visible, tangible sign
    That our grief is to do with

    What our eyes have seen,
    Our ears have heard
    And our hands have touched.

  • Comment number 22.

    This comment was removed because the moderators found it broke the house rules. Explain.

  • Comment number 23.

    (I assume this poem was blocked because I put an offending legal term underneath it. I'll try again having omitted it...)


    A meditation at sunset

    Its guttering-glimmering embers entranced me,
    Seduced me, beckoned me -
    A tangled tapestry of golden joy dancing;
    A slow and gracious choreography
    Wooing and stirring, teasing this lone onlooker
    With whispers of promise.
    This serendipity of serendipities
    This fitting finale, a quiet hurrah
    Nature's glowing approval, a job well done;
    This mellowing light an interval, drawing breath -
    The artist standing back from his masterpiece
    Crossing his arms, a smile of pleasure,
    Nodding his head, dabbing his brow,
    Readying himself for his next composition:
    The shining hope of morning.

    Some see a majestic dance, others only rotating spheres
    Some see brushstrokes of beauty, others only refracted luminosity
    Some see hope and promise, others unshakeable despair
    Some see the life behind the canvas; others only a void and endless oblivion

    They say "seeing is believing".

    What do you see?



    LSV

  • Comment number 24.


    And RJB, I liked your choice to. Who wrote it?

    Another thought, given that we have be thinking on another thread of the paradoxes in faith.

    by James Montgomery 1771 - 1854 (probably better known for "Forever with the Lord")


    Go to dark Gethsemane,

    Go to dark Gethsemane,
    ye that feel the tempter's power;
    your Redeemer's conflict see,
    watch with him one bitter hour.
    Turn not from his griefs away;
    learn of Jesus Christ to pray.

    See him at the judgment hall,
    beaten, bound, reviled, arraigned;
    O the wormwood and the gall!
    O the pangs his soul sustained!
    Shun not suffering, shame, or loss;
    learn of Christ to bear the cross.

    Calvary's mournful mountain climb;
    there, adoring at his feet,
    mark that miracle of time,
    God's own sacrifice complete.
    "It is finished!" hear him cry;
    learn of Jesus Christ to die.

    Early hasten to the tomb
    where they laid his breathless clay;
    all is solitude and gloom.
    Who has taken him away?
    Christ is risen! He meets our eyes;
    Savior, teach us so to rise.

  • Comment number 25.



    Peter - # 24. I wouldn't be surprised if RJB penned # 21 himself. Certainly it speaks authentically of him.Ìý

    I tend to like devotional poetry which takes some common idea and overturns it in the process radically changing, inverting or expanding some limiting preconception.ÌýÌýVaughan's The Night is a superb example. I will quote only the last verse:

    ÌýÌýÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý There is in God—some say—
    A deep, but dazzling darkness ; as men here
    Say it is late and dusky, because they
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýSee not all clear.
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý O for that Night ! Ìýwhere I in Him
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Might live invisible and dim!


    I wonder,too, what people might make of Herbert's Hope. It appears superficially almost nonsensical but is, I think, one of the most profound expressions of the disconnection of much of human religious expectation and that which contact with the Divine actually offers.

    IÌýgave to Hope a watch of mine: but he
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýAn anchor gave to me.
    Then an old prayer-book I did present: Ìý
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýAnd he an optic sent.
    With that I gave a vial full of tears: Ìý
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýBut he a few green ears:
    Ah Loiterer! I’ll no more, no more I’ll bring: Ìý
    ÌýÌý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýI did expect a ring.



  • Comment number 26.

    Death on a Crossing.
    By Evangeline Patterson.

    What he never thought to consider was whether
    the thing was true. What bewildered him, mostly,
    was the way that the rumours had of reaching him
    from such improbable sources - illiterate pamphelts pressed in his hand, the brash or the floundering stranger
    who came to his door, the proclamations, among
    so many others, on hoardings

    though sometimes waking
    a brief dismay, that never quite prodded him
    to the analysts couch.

    But annunciations, he thought, should come to a rational man in a rational way.
    He walked between a skyful of midnight angels
    and a patch on somebody's jeans, both saying
    the same thing to his stopped ears.

    till the day
    when he stepped on a crossing with not enough conviction
    to get him safe to the other side, and he lay
    among strangers feet, and the angels lowered their trumpets
    and no sweet chariot swung, to carry him home.

  • Comment number 27.


    Parrhasios

    I've been thinking quite a bit about Hope and I'm thinking something like, and these were still living by faith when they died.

    And I'm also thinking that 'streets of gold' aren't really the reason to want to be there

  • Comment number 28.

    The Respectable Burgher on "The Higher Criticism"
    by Thomas Hardy

    Since Reverend Doctors now declare
    That clerks and people must prepare
    To doubt if Adam ever were;
    To hold the flood a local scare;
    To argue, though the stolid stare,
    That everything had happened ere
    The prophets to its happening sware;
    That David was no giant-slayer,
    Nor one to call a God-obeyer
    In certain details we could spare,
    But rather was a debonair
    Shrewd bandit, skilled as banjo-player:
    That Solomon sang the fleshly Fair,
    And gave the Church no thought whate'er;
    That Esther with her royal wear,
    And Mordecai, the son of Jair,
    And Joshua's triumphs, Job's despair,
    And Balaam's ass's bitter blare;
    Nebuchadnezzar's furnace-flare,
    And Daniel and the den affair,
    And other stories rich and rare,
    Were writ to make old doctrine wear
    Something of a romantic air:
    That the Nain widow's only heir,
    And Lazarus with cadaverous glare
    (As done in oils by Piombo's care)
    Did not return from Sheol's lair:
    That Jael set a fiendish snare,
    That Pontius Pilate acted square,
    That never a sword cut Malchus' ear
    And (but for shame I must forbear)
    That -- -- did not reappear! . . .
    - Since thus they hint, nor turn a hair,
    All churchgoing will I forswear,
    And sit on Sundays in my chair,
    And read that moderate man Voltaire.

  • Comment number 29.



    Peter - # 27.Ìý

    It is certainly worth thinking about. I think it is an extraordinary poem - I get the reference you make to Hebrews and to those whose faith was in a promise. I think the poem speaks just as well though to us today.Ìý

    When we approach God we all too often come not just with our need (the vial full of tears) but with an agenda (the prayer-book) and often indeed a time-table (the watch). We present things in the wrong order, we are impatient, we want a visible sign of a practically contractual commitment, and we ignore or fail to grasp what contact with God actually offers.

    Herbert says we find in God something that grounds us and centres us, something that holds us fast in the storms of life (the anchor); something that allows us to change our perspective, to embark on a wholly different way of seeing (the telescope); something that is not an end but a beginning, not a prefabricated solution but the germ of life and growth (the green seeds).

    It's a pretty perfect summation of my Christianity.


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