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Comparing two texts from different times: summary and synthesis

Comparing two texts from different times (eg 100 years apart) helps to identify how each achieves its purpose. Link the texts by theme or topic, eg both might be about experiences of poverty, education, survival, or even a popular day out.

When linking two texts, we and :

  • the different viewpoints in each text, eg caning was accepted in the early 1900s but not today
  • the purposes - the writer鈥檚 reasons for writing the texts or what they want to achieve
  • methods used to convey viewpoints, eg text type, structure, language differences, tone
  • context 鈥 this will come from within the texts, eg modern references, such as 鈥楪oogle鈥, or from the past, such as 鈥榩rinting press鈥
  • intended audiences - this could be one reader or a specific group of readers

Question:

Use details from both extracts. Write a summary of the different ways and reasons that help is offered to homeless people.

Extract 1:

Spend a night on the streets for a Nottingham homeless charity by Ben Ireland, The Nottingham Post, September 10, 2015.

Chris Kershaw, senior PR assistant at The Nottingham Building Society, is taking part in his fourth sleep out.

He said: "I think it's important that people experience the extreme conditions. We only have to do it for one night, but we must remember homeless people don't have the privilege to pick and choose when they sleep out."

Mr Kershaw, 39, of Spondon, said the charity was close to his heart because of mental health and addiction issues in his family.

"It might surprise readers, but the sleep out is actually really fun. Being homeless certainly isn't, but there's a real community effort in this event.鈥

The Nottingham Post, Ben Ireland

Extract 2:

Night Walks (1861) by Charles Dickens 鈥 here Dickens writes about his experience of coming across a homeless man in London.

Suddenly, a thing that in a moment more I should have trodden upon without seeing, rose up at my feet with a cry of loneliness and , the like of which I never heard. We then stood face to face looking at one another, frightened by one another. The creature was like a beetle-browed hair-lipped youth of twenty, and it had a loose bundle of rags on, which it held together with one of its hands. It shivered from head to foot, and its teeth chattered, and as it stared at me - , devil, ghost, whatever it thought me - it made with its whining mouth as if it were snapping at me, like a worried dog. Intending to give this ugly object money, I put out my hand to stay it for it as it whined and snapped and laid my hand upon its shoulder. Instantly, it twisted out of its garment 鈥 and left me standing alone with its rags in my hands.

Night Walks (1861), Charles Dickens

SUMMARISE - scan read both texts for 2 or 3 main points:

Extract 1 鈥 2015Extract 2 - 1861
The 鈥榮leep out鈥 is organised 鈥 a 鈥榗ommunity鈥 event. It is regular 鈥 this is Mr Kershaw鈥檚 鈥榝ourth鈥.Dickens stumbles across the homeless man accidently 鈥 he does not deliberately set out to help.
Mr Kershaw thinks it is important people understand the 鈥榚xtreme conditions鈥 by experiencing them 鈥 as well as raising money.Dickens intends to offer money with no further involvement. He frightens the homeless man before he is able to help him.
Mr Kershaw has personal reasons for helping the homeless.Dickens helps because he pities the man鈥檚 condition.
Extract 1 鈥 2015The 鈥榮leep out鈥 is organised 鈥 a 鈥榗ommunity鈥 event. It is regular 鈥 this is Mr Kershaw鈥檚 鈥榝ourth鈥.
Extract 2 - 1861Dickens stumbles across the homeless man accidently 鈥 he does not deliberately set out to help.
Extract 1 鈥 2015Mr Kershaw thinks it is important people understand the 鈥榚xtreme conditions鈥 by experiencing them 鈥 as well as raising money.
Extract 2 - 1861Dickens intends to offer money with no further involvement. He frightens the homeless man before he is able to help him.
Extract 1 鈥 2015Mr Kershaw has personal reasons for helping the homeless.
Extract 2 - 1861Dickens helps because he pities the man鈥檚 condition.

SYNTHESISE 鈥 compare the differences:

In Extract 1, Chris Kershaw 鈥渋s taking part in his fourth sleep out鈥, suggesting that helping the homeless is an organised and regular event. 鈥淐ommunity effort鈥 suggests that everyone is getting together to help. In Extract 2, Dickens is shocked and 鈥渇rightened鈥 when he comes across a homeless man 鈥渟uddenly鈥. He has not deliberately planned to help homeless people. Dickens is alone in his effort to offer the homeless man any help, unlike Extract 1 where lots of people are helping.

Kershaw thinks that people should experience the 鈥渆xtreme conditions鈥 and remember that homeless people 鈥渄on't have the privilege to pick and choose when they sleep out鈥. This shows that he wants to do more than just give money, he wants people to understand how hard life is for homeless people and why giving money to help is so important. On the other hand, Dickens intends to 鈥済ive this ugly object money鈥 but shows no intention of becoming more involved than that.

The reasons for helping are different in the extracts. Kershaw hints that 鈥渇amily issues鈥 mean that helping is personal and 鈥渃lose to his heart鈥. Dickens notices that the homeless man 鈥渟hivered鈥 and wore 鈥渁 bundle of rags鈥, implying that he pities the 鈥渃reature鈥 but has no deeply personal reasons for helping him.